Saturday, September 25, 2010

On Thursday we did our group critiques. I wasn't sure what I want to share or if I wanted to share my work at all. But after the little exercise we did in the beginning of the class I felt more comfortable. I shared a branch off story I wrote when I was sixteen after reading The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien. It's told from the perspective of the main character, Linda and the secret struggle she went through while liking her classmate, Tim. The story is short and after the group critique I saw how much people liked it. I know I have a lot of work to do and after receiving my classmates feedback I'm really excited to add more to the story.

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