I moan for a moment
Eternity of lust
behind her dress
life is beauty
frantic as a mist
after a storm
Welcome to the blog for Prof. John Talbird's English 102 class. The purpose of this site is two-fold: 1) to continue the conversations we start in class (and to start conversations BEFORE we get to class) and 2) to practice our writing/reading on a weekly basis in an informal forum. You are required to write AT LEAST two paragraphs a week (in one or more postings).
I THINK THIS POEM TOUCHES ME IN A WAY OF LOST LOVE BECAUSE WHEN YOUR IN A RELATIONSHIP YOU THINK THAT YOUR IN LOVE BUT MOSTLY YOUR NOT, ESPECIALLY IF THE PERSON IS JUST MESSING WITH YOUR HEAD. THIS SIGNIFY A JOURNEY OF LOVE, WHICH CATEGORIZE ME FOR INSTANT AS ITS TIME TO MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE. I'M GOING TO GIVE A SAMPLE OF A POEM I WROTE ALONG TIME AGO;
ReplyDeleteIT'S TIME FOR ME TO MOVE ON
I CANT KEEP HANGING ON
ALL I EVER WANTED WAS YOU
NOW, I CAN ONLY HAVE MEMORIES
ONCE DATING AND SO TRUE
I WISH YOU WAS STILL MY LOVER
EVEN IF YOU WERE UNDERCOVER
YOU SAID THAT YOU NEVER MEANT TO TAKE YOUR LOVE WAY
BUT IT WAS LIKE A KISS IN THE WIND AND BLEW YOUR LOVE AWAY
"LOVE IN A FRANTIC-MIST" IS COLD AND LONELINESS THAT IS TRAGICALLY MYSTERIOUS AND BROKEN, FOR SOMEONE WHO FEEL LIKE THEY'RE UNDER A WRAP WHERE THERE IS NO PLACE FOR THEM TO GO OR FEEL LIKE THEY BELONGING TO ANYONE. THE "THE STORM" TELLING US THAT TO PURE OUT WHATEVER IT MIGHT BE AND FULFILL THAT DREAM,LOVE, AND SONG THAT IS PRECIOUS TO YOU AND DON'T DESTROY IT BECAUSE LIFE IS LIFE AND IT SHALL BE FULFILL.